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Recall those times of mirthful song,
How we used to sing along.
Why does the time feel so long,
Since I left the place where innocent belong?

Those times, they feel far, far away.
Sometimes I wish I could just fly, far away.
But I'm wingless, caged and spurned
By the paths to which I turned.

Recall when we'd run across the field,
Only at sundown would we yield.
But now you're dirtied, now you've killed.
When will this chaos at last be stilled?

Those times, they feel far, far away.
Sometimes I wish I could just fly, far away.
But I'm wingless, caged and spurned
By the paths to which I turned.

So many failures I've been forced to cope
The successes unseen in the world's big scope.
Blinded, around this pitch dark I grope.
When will this world have a hope?

Those times, they feel far, far away.
Sometimes I wish I could just fly, far away.
But I'm wingless, caged and spurned
By the paths to which I turned.
©2006-2009 ~Mekryd
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Author's Comments

This is an old poem I did. Nearly a year old, actually... I rediscovered it when going through an old forum in which I happened to have posted it. So... yeah.

This... is another of those depressing things I've written, without actually feeling depressed at all. At least I think so.

I'm not quite satisfied with it... but when am I ever?

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:iconskarmorythepg:
...oooh. This pole likes it. Just... somehow, I like it :)

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Hmmm, maybe it was not you who wrote this. Maybe it was just a movement to your mind and it kinda came out like this. Its very well done. You have a lot of talent for writing. Depressing maybe, but to a lot of people truthful.

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